The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

9/30/2019

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Sample: 1:

The bar charts represents the percentage of people in Canada using multiple social networking sites for two years including 2014 and 2015.

Overall, about one fifth people living in Canada uses no social networking sites, whereas, approximately 30% Canadians of the total population uses one social networking site in the year 2014 and 2015.

The percentage of people using no social sites decreased insignificantly in 2015. However, 36% of Canadians used one social networking sites in 2014 and the number decreased in 2015 making approximately one third of the total population.

In 2014, 23% people used two sites for social networking, which was increased a little bit in 2015 making about one fourth of the total population. The number of people using three sites increased by 4% in 2015, which constituted 16%. Very few people used four sites in 2014 for social networking, which slightly increased in 2015 making only 8%. Only 2% Canadians used five sites for social networking which was increased by only 2% in the year 2015.

Minutes took: 27 mins/ try to finish by 18 minutes, keep 2 minutes for revision:

Feedback: Score 7:

There are minor grammatical mistakes like subject verb agreement, passive voice,
Instead of present form write past as this report is for 2014 & 2015.

Sample: 2:

The bar chart depicts how different the number of social networking sites’ usage of people is in Canada between the years 2014 and 2015. Overall, it has been observed that people have more tendency to use more than one social networking site in 2015 than 2014.

At the beginning of the period,i.e., in 2014 more than half of the population, 58% to be precise, used either one or no social networking sites whereas it fell sharply in 2015 to 49%. In 2015, people’s habit of using social networking sites increased with more than 50% of the people using two or more sites. However, in both the years, the highest percentage of people were inclined to use only one networking site.

Feedback: score 4.5 ( as you have written only 120 words) / you must write 150 words this is the instruction.

5 Comments

Vijay Rao

10/1/2020 16:48:19

The bar graph illustrates data of multiple social networking sites users of Canada for two years including 2014 and 2015.

Overall, it is clearly understand that approximately one fifth of total population do not use any site, whereas one third people use only a single site.

Looking at the details shown in graph,the percentage of single site users was little bit more then one third of total users in 2014 and it decreased to 28% in 2015. However the number of people using no social networking site decreased from 22% to 21%.

In 2014, 23% people used two social networking sites, which was increased in 2015 upto a quarter of total population. The number of people used three social networking sites was increased by 4% in 2015, which seen 16%. One in twenty people used four sites in 2014, which was increased in 2015 and goes to 8%. Very few people used five sites for social networking in 2014 and only 4% people used in 2015 with the increment of 2%.

Greeshma Jose

10/28/2020 13:22:06

Please evalute. ..
The bar chart specifies the data about how many inhabitants of Canada used more than one online social website in two consecutive years ( 2014 and 2015)
Overall, it is evident from the chart that Canadians exhibited a downward trend with increase in number of sites. Despite increase, people who used only one site depicted a highest rate.
As we can see from the chart, majority of occupiers used only one site which is accounted for 36% in 2014 and 28% in 2015.Similarly, an insignificant number of natives used five sites in both periods, at 2% and 4% respectively. At the same time, more than one fifth percent of Canadians never used any websites which is accounted for 22% in 2014 and 21% in 2015.Like wise, nearly a quarter (24%) of inhabitants used two sites in 2015 while a one percent decline outlined in 2014,at 23%.Apparently, a minority of less than one in ten percentage of people used four sites in 2014 and 2015 which is figured at 5% and 8% independently.

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12/19/2020 16:55:37

Very badly written. Booooooo

G Joseph P

8/15/2021 23:53:44

The bar charts represent the percentage of people in Canada who used multiple social networking sites for two years including 2014 and 2015.
Overall, about one-fifth of the people living in Canada used no social networking sites, whereas, Canadians who used a single social networking site in the years were the highest. The percentage of people using five sites and four sites were very less in proportion
The percentage of people using more social networking sites displayed a marginal increase when comparing 2014 to 2015. The people using two, three, four and five sites increased from 23 to 24, 12 to 16, 5 to 8 and 2 to 4 percentages respectively when compared
The percentage of people using none of the social networking sites decreased slightly in 2015. It fell from 22% to 21%. While a bigger drop was witnessed in the people using a single social networking site. While it registered the highest percentage of 36% in 2014, it dropped to 28% in 2015. Although there was a fall, this was still the highest percentage in 2015.

Mia

1/18/2022 16:16:35

Please evaluate my statement, many thanks!

The given bar chart illustrates the data regarding the amount of social networking sites which are used by Canadian during the period from 2014 to 2015.
It is clear from the chart that the one site was the most used one among the other networking sites in Canada, whereas, the least preferable sites were five sites in the year 2014 and 2015.
In 2014, only 2% of population used the five social networking sites, however this number doubled up 4% in 2015. There was a significant huge gap between the use of three sites by 12% and four sites only 5% in 2014. The gap narrowed in a small degree in 2015, three sites 16% and four sites 8%.
The percentage of people who used the one social networking site was the largest over 35% compare with other sites in 2014. However, this number decreased dramatically at 28% in 2015. Almost the same number of population used no social networking sites and two sites in 2015, 22% and 23% respectively. There was an increase the use of two sites (24%), while no sites experienced a slight drop 21%.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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