For some people this statement is true that computers are the most important things for new generation people.I am totally agree with these people and this is because we can communicate with people all over the world.This eassy will disscuss the involvement of computers in human life and some scientific researches and why people deny the importance of computers.
First of all,for the last 100 years,computers have been contributing to develop peoples life style with a lot of research,experiment which has been eassier to do through computer.Worlds most expensive,significant information conveing by the computer tool with that this tool bear the human personal life too.For example,Google has a lot information about every people who has an account on Google and the research and experimental ideas put on computers for safe and secure from enemy.
Secondly, nowdays human being are depandent on computers in their daily life and they cannot stay for long time. Internet has been using for computers where has that element which is enough to cheerful peoples mood. For exmaple,facebook,twitter,instagram and so on application have to use when human feel depressed to pleased their time in a moment.
On the contrary,computer not only the significant invention but also some physics law,vaccine of rare disease and dangerous problem for people.General people are not alive to use computer or internet, they require more than that to live in this planet like some important madicines and unbelieveable instruments.Scientist invented new space and planet like ours to use physics law which is also the significant for human.Such as,Vaccine of Cancer disease is needed for dying people and deficiency of this disease many people had died in past.Owing of this reason this is the most effective invention for people.
To recapitulate, computers is not only related about information and ideas whereas madical instrument and some scientific research made this world better than before.Therefore,without all of this thing we did not get the better world
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First of all,for the last 100 years,computers have been contributing to develop peoples life style with a lot of research,experiment which has been eassier to do through computer.Worlds most expensive,significant information conveing by the computer tool with that this tool bear the human personal life too.For example,Google has a lot information about every people who has an account on Google and the research and experimental ideas put on computers for safe and secure from enemy.
Secondly, nowdays human being are depandent on computers in their daily life and they cannot stay for long time. Internet has been using for computers where has that element which is enough to cheerful peoples mood. For exmaple,facebook,twitter,instagram and so on application have to use when human feel depressed to pleased their time in a moment.
On the contrary,computer not only the significant invention but also some physics law,vaccine of rare disease and dangerous problem for people.General people are not alive to use computer or internet, they require more than that to live in this planet like some important madicines and unbelieveable instruments.Scientist invented new space and planet like ours to use physics law which is also the significant for human.Such as,Vaccine of Cancer disease is needed for dying people and deficiency of this disease many people had died in past.Owing of this reason this is the most effective invention for people.
To recapitulate, computers is not only related about information and ideas whereas madical instrument and some scientific research made this world better than before.Therefore,without all of this thing we did not get the better world
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