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Task 1:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Task 1:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table shows average sales of a restaurant’s three different branches in the year 2016 each of which was located in Vancouver city, Canada.
Overall, restaurant in Georgia street made the biggest sale ($10.69) among the three branches and the least sale occurred from Dunsmuir street branch ($5.61). Georgia street branch seemed very popular among the three branches.
From the table, it is clear that Georgia street branch made the highest number of transactions and Drake street branch made almost half transactions compared to that of Georgia which was the lowest one. Among these three branches, people used to like eating in Georgia street branch since the number of eat-in transactions was the highest making up to 405 transactions whereas Drake street branch made half transactions compared to that of Georgia.
In addition, take away food was most popular in Georgia street branch and least number of transactions for take away food came from Drake street branch. However, the difference in number of take away transactions for Georgia and Dunsmuir branch is insignificant compared to that of Drake street. In these three restaurants, foods made up with chicken were the most popular food items.
Feedback score: 7.5
Overall, restaurant in Georgia street made the biggest sale ($10.69) among the three branches and the least sale occurred from Dunsmuir street branch ($5.61). Georgia street branch seemed very popular among the three branches.
From the table, it is clear that Georgia street branch made the highest number of transactions and Drake street branch made almost half transactions compared to that of Georgia which was the lowest one. Among these three branches, people used to like eating in Georgia street branch since the number of eat-in transactions was the highest making up to 405 transactions whereas Drake street branch made half transactions compared to that of Georgia.
In addition, take away food was most popular in Georgia street branch and least number of transactions for take away food came from Drake street branch. However, the difference in number of take away transactions for Georgia and Dunsmuir branch is insignificant compared to that of Drake street. In these three restaurants, foods made up with chicken were the most popular food items.
Feedback score: 7.5
Sample: 2
The tabular representation provides a comparitive summary with respect to the mean number of sales of three branches of a restaurant situated in three different streets of Vancouver,Canada in 2016.
Overall, the branch in Georgia Street can be regarded as high performer with respect to the number of transactions in all the catergories as well as the transaction value whereas the Drake Street’s branch is was/ the low performer.
To begin with, the branch situated in Georgia Street has/ hadthe most number of transactions with 854 transactions whereas the branch in Dunsmuir Street comes/ came at second position with 750 transactions and Drake Street branch is the last one with only 390 transactions. But with respect to transaction value although Georgia Street branch is at top with 10.69 dollars, Dunsmuir Street branch has the lowest transaction value of 5.61 dollars. Moreover,all the branches have more Take-away transactions than Eat-in transactions except the Drake Street one. Lastly, various kinds of chicken items (Burger, chicken wings and pasta respectively) are the most popular itemsin all three branches.
Feedback score: 6+
The tabular representation provides a comparitive summary with respect to the mean number of sales of three branches of a restaurant situated in three different streets of Vancouver,Canada in 2016.
Overall, the branch in Georgia Street can be regarded as high performer with respect to the number of transactions in all the catergories as well as the transaction value whereas the Drake Street’s branch is was/ the low performer.
To begin with, the branch situated in Georgia Street has/ hadthe most number of transactions with 854 transactions whereas the branch in Dunsmuir Street comes/ came at second position with 750 transactions and Drake Street branch is the last one with only 390 transactions. But with respect to transaction value although Georgia Street branch is at top with 10.69 dollars, Dunsmuir Street branch has the lowest transaction value of 5.61 dollars. Moreover,all the branches have more Take-away transactions than Eat-in transactions except the Drake Street one. Lastly, various kinds of chicken items (Burger, chicken wings and pasta respectively) are the most popular itemsin all three branches.
Feedback score: 6+
- Look after your use of tense”. If the chart describes past event, write it in past.
